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BAWW. I pretty much despise this. There are a couple things that I like, but I mainly hate it.

THE ARMS ARE FAIL, THE PANTS ARE FAIL, THE SHIRT IS FAIL, THE SCARF IS FAIL, EVERYTHING IS FAIL.

It's supposed to be me, but I don't even have eyelashes in the picture. BLEH.

I think the only things I really like are the ear and the earrings. They're nice looking, I guess.

I PUT ABOUT 7 HOURS INTO THIS PIECE OF FAIL?

OH YE GODZ. I HAVE NO LIFE.

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:icongodzilla23:
haha ncie ;D i liek the ear too~ :3 i also liek the shading on teh face : D :iconyeahplz:

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GAO?って いっても きもいだけでしょ

(笑)

~yokami-studio check out the manga that we're workin on! :>
:iconaho-chan:
OMFGREAAAAALLY? YOU LIKE IT? HUZZAH! :iconyeahplz:

The nose got really annoying after a while. XD

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J'ai faim. Est-ce que je peux manger ton visage?
:icongodzilla23:
haha YEAH! :iconyeahplz:

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GAO?って いっても きもいだけでしょ

(笑)

~yokami-studio check out the manga that we're workin on! :>
:iconaho-chan:
YEEEEEEAH! :iconyeahplz: :iconyeahplz:

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J'ai faim. Est-ce que je peux manger ton visage?
:iconsharaia:
You're right, the ear is good. ^^

I can help, give pointers? Is it okay if I save the picture to my computer and write notes on it? I can do that and send it to you.

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"Quote the Hell out of it!", "When in doubt, shut up." The Kramminator
"Shhhh... You know what that means? The first two letters of shut uuup!" The Herr
-Shar XD
:iconsharaia:
...Can I draw a picture of you for you? I suddenly want to.

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"Quote the Hell out of it!", "When in doubt, shut up." The Kramminator
"Shhhh... You know what that means? The first two letters of shut uuup!" The Herr
-Shar XD
:iconskarlet-raven:
Aw, hey, what counts is that you tried hard.

:la:

I love how you rendered the ear- ears give me absolute trouble in all my drawings and paintings. No wonder I tend to draw/paint hair covering the ear. I either do that, or ask the art teacher 'How do I fix this ear' about fifty times a painting.

The nose looks nice, too. Noses are tough sometimes.

As far as nitpicky critique, I'd probably try to give the hair a little more flowing definition. Maybe you could try adding in a few individual strands of hair here and there?

Maybe I'd try to add in more values for each color- in essence, move a bit further than the basic highlight/base/shadows? I would try to throw in some interesting colors [consider a bit of subtle purple for shading in skin, maybe] to give the shadows a little more life.

Finally, I'd try to pick a specific light source/angle- that would help to show where the shadows should fall on the subject. [/art-geeking]

Otherwise, it's cool that you're working on digital painting.

:D

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:iconaho-chan:
Okay! Go ahead! :la:

That'll make me real happy! My birthday's in a couple weeks. X3

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J'ai faim. Est-ce que je peux manger ton visage?
:iconaho-chan:
Thanksh X3

Well, I think the reason that the quality really went downhill is because I got REALLY lazy later on, but sure! Pointers would be really nice!

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J'ai faim. Est-ce que je peux manger ton visage?

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